ON SEEING JUPITER 26 9 22
Jupiter with its boundless grace
reaches out tonight on a cold sweeping ellipse
and I see its pinprick face with supporting actors
stuck in some catastrophic race for arrival
emblazoned on a velvet curtain
closer tonight on its visit from outer space,
like any thespian it senses its moment,
the spotlight of our life - giving sun reveals it.
From some haunted vault on an open plain
through glass there are men who know her habits
its massive turbulence, frightful fretting,
the cold shoulder of its surface, reach out
clutching at straws of understanding.
But it is we on the beautiful Earth who are fracturing
and though we live with greatness
our wonder is simply the fear of being alone.
raypool
Fri 30th Sep 2022 12:15
Frederick John and Holden, thanks all for your liking this one.
Many thanks Greg, I do my best!
That app sounds excellent Graham. This was another poem I rewrote completely and that idea came the second time. Thanks.
Thank you Massoud for your observations. I think you have touched on humility there, and the quest for wonder is a great one. So called reality seems to be a relative term depending on subjectivity or objectivity. Such a vast subject.
A lovely comment Stephen, thank you. I tried to make it seem personal.
Ray