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The Final Blessing

All summer long the land was parched and dry.

The leaves were brittle, and we craved the rain.

Our grass was yellow, cracked and baked,

But the clouds were barren, the land still ached.

 

The drizzle began as it approached eleven,

Larger drops fell as the due hour called,

Ere glorious torrents descended from heaven,

Splashing down in life-restoring vigour.

Like the tears we shed, grateful, not distressing.

When we ever had need, your heart  supplied.

The rain which fell, was your final blessing.

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John Botterill

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:25

Thanks Stephen, for your kind comments. It means a lot to me. 😀
Thanks for the likes Frederick and Nigel.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:00

A beautiful, wholly original poem, John.

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:56

Thanks Stephen. You're very kind. And thanks for the like, K. Lynn and Rose . 😀

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:07

A lovely piece, John

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:15

Thanks Greg, Jennifer and Julie. It means a lot to me.

It really did rain heavily here at 11. First time in months 😀

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:55

Really touching. Loved 'tghe land still ached', and the tears 'grateful not distressing.' So well said.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 19th Sep 2022 13:07

I admire this poem very much, John.

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