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TRAVEL

The long slow fields come and go in languid succession

the speeding hedgerows, the infinitude of destinations

with their suspicions, lessons to learn. 

 

Inside the car sterile familiarity,

function carrying your body as planned. 

 

Is there a reason I wonder

in that hanging moment between signs, features

of landscape to be subdued, anxiety accepted.

 

It's all a joke really and the punch line

always delivers, leaving us needy again

for the open plain, the country lane

the silly face of the speedo

like a judge in session

always keeping up the uneasy truce. 

🌷(6)

◄ GUN LAW

LOST AND GONE FOREVER ►

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raypool

Tue 13th Dec 2022 11:15

Thanks John, Keith Holden and Flyntland for your welcome likes.

Hi Stephen, I do like to get in to a scene and this is one such! The mind wanders but the speedo checks up as you spotted. I often wonder about the necessity of travel, and for many it is a pain in the proverbial. I had to cover great distances doing gigs, many at night to return. It's in the nature of man to wander of course.

Thank you Graham for coming along for the virtual ride, all conjured up from long memories of gigs. Motorways in particular encourage that mindlessness, the endless uniformity.

Thank you Uilleam. Interestingly, if you try to focus on fast near objects it makes you realize the truth of speed rather than the long view. I love the idea of photographing it where possible! We could do with more walking for the benefit of mind and body.

Hi Jennifer, i'm glad you picked on that, as it seems to embody the long reach of travel. Cheers!

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Mon 12th Dec 2022 18:34

Loved the first lines in particular, Ray. Remember watching the long, slow fields ......... many times.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 10th Dec 2022 11:01

That 1st line really sets the scene.

In today's world it seems hard to believe the only means of transport once was our own two feet!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 9th Dec 2022 08:16

I am continually amazed just how mindless one can become whilst driving. Especially on regular and familiar journeys.
Even the construction of your piece hints at the same. Were you driving when this was developed Ray?

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 9th Dec 2022 06:49

Your poems are always an event, Ray. This climaxes in the 'silly face of the speedo'. This conjures up so many things.

Do we need to travel, or is there something deeper which complels us to try it?

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