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Zero Sum

Think pointless wars in places like Ukraine,

Where ungrown men are daily bashed to bits.

The battle rages on through sun and rain

And morning's loss foretells a later gain.

 

Lines move or bend, but finish up the same,

As reinforcements make sure each piece fits.

The casualties have no time to explain

The part as zero-sum pawns in this game.

 

The dead, we claim, like land, are cancelled out

By unmatched totals, buried in the pits,

And managing this boiling vat of doubt,

Is what, as time evolves, all war’s about.

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Ukraine

◄ Hirohito

Prayer for Ukraine ►

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 16th Jan 2023 17:13

Thank you so much, Hélène and John. I will always be a voice for piece. I recognize that Ukraine has no choice but to defend itself but war and violence are always abhorrent. The 'zero sum' element of the poem is the way that war is sanitised and justified by illusory gains which involve front line troops being used as cannon fodder for a maintaining a deadlock, while towns and infrastructure are gradually destroyed. So sad.

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John Botterill

Sun 15th Jan 2023 20:21

Brilliant poem. Intelligent and humane. Unlike the war!

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Hélène

Sun 15th Jan 2023 16:56

I really appreciate all these voices for peace. Thanks Stephen for putting our thoughts & feelings into poetry, & thanks guys for the comments taking a broad historical view of this utterly heartbreaking attack on Ukraine. Mankind can't seem to let go of violence, on the battlefield, on the streets, in homes, everywhere really. Is there a dimension where peace and harmony reign? I would like to go there someday! But in the meanwhile, thanks again guys for being thoughtful voices for peace.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 15th Jan 2023 16:01

And thanks to Rudyard, Keith and Manish. Your support is really appreciated.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 15th Jan 2023 15:59

You put it most eloquently, Greg. The 'Zero Sum' element of this war (mass slaughter for small bits of territory, often subsequently lost) harks back to WW1 and the punishment bombing to WW2. So sad that a great civilisation like Russia has descended to this.

Thanks, Philip. There is something about war which recreates a lethal school bully.

Thanks for the kind comment, Reggie's Ghost.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 15th Jan 2023 12:55

This war is turning into an amalgam of the first and second world wars ... the pointless slaughter, the mud and deadlock of the first, the evil genocide of the second. What a legacy. How Russia has trampled memories of its heroic fightback in the second world war into the dust.

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Philip Stevens

Sat 14th Jan 2023 23:07

Ungrown men are dangerous thier actions disastrous.

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Reggie's Ghost

Sat 14th Jan 2023 19:30

Well constructed piece Stephen.

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