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Wild Strawberries

In the unexpected, blessed sunshine of Spring,

I found myself, unexpectedly, weeding,

at the top of our grimly Wintered Garden.

Was I dreaming? I opened, wide, my eyes.

The garden, too, seemed to share my surprise.

“What are you doing here?” she said.

"You didn’t bother last year, dear,

or much, indeed, the year before!”

I blanked the garden as I thought her rude!

 I don’t reply to rudeness anymore!

 

I pulled hard at the shallow, tangled, roots,

Each, straggly, trailing tendril, led to another.

Families sending out their sisters and brothers!

They came away in clumps of dark brown soil,

which smelled of earthy, peaty loam,

when I wiped that filthy witness from my hands,

and stood up, to gaze at the fruits of my toil.

Who knew that this old garden had so much soil?

 

My ideas, now gathered in a fine, tall pile,

all separate, and yet somehow connected,

formerly abandoned, now suddenly tended.

My thoughts, mind weeds, until expressed,

amended, tilled, trimmed and perfected.

Ideas, now blossoming words, which I can own.

 

My garden is shaped into a poetic form,

and the dewy green grass is freshly mown.

The abundant, new growth shines resplendent,

free from the foliage which was dead!

And the Garden and I are friends once again.

“You’ve done a right good job, John,” she said.

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◄ At Water's Edge

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John Botterill

Tue 11th Apr 2023 19:26

Thanks, Helene. What a delightful comment. I shall treasure it! 😄

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Hélène

Tue 11th Apr 2023 05:25

Love this! A fun read about tidying things up in the garden & the mind. Really good flow to the words. Love the conversation between the surprised garden & the equally surprised gardener, and then a jump into the poet's shoes. Really cool!

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John Botterill

Mon 10th Apr 2023 19:33

Thanks so much, Stephen. I'm not so sure about being a gardener, though 😂. Thanks for the likes, Clare and Nigel.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 10th Apr 2023 17:26

I loved this poem, John. It is a story of achievement and redemption. OK, it's only a garden, but what a garden. And what a gardener!

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