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The Memory Of Her

On Prebends bridge I caught the evolution of twilight into dawn.

Watched shifting hues of shadow and light brightening into colour.

And, for a moment, I thought I saw her 

looking up through the morning mist.

Her pallid, frail frame accentuated by the glistening blue ocean of her eyes. 

But, she faded. Like the mist itself

And all that I was left with, once again, 

was the shallow entrails 

of  the memory of her

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 19th Apr 2023 18:11

Thank you, John! You know me, I sometimes can't help turning things a little sinister 😄👺

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John Botterill

Wed 19th Apr 2023 17:20

Gorgeous poem, Stephen. I love the ethereal, ghostlike quality of your writing. Romantic and a little sinister ('shallow entrails') at the same time. Great!

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 19th Apr 2023 13:34

I wondered why the water was that colour 😂 & Newcastle Exhibition! Now, that was what you called bad head gear the next day! 🤮. Happy memories...sort of

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John Coopey

Wed 19th Apr 2023 12:06

I too have memories of Prebends Bridge, Stephen, though not as yours. I was a student at Durham when the bow and arrow were secret weapons. Prebends Bridge was a stop-off on our way home to “download” the night’s Newcastle Exhibition.

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