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Luggage for the Onward Journey

Luggage for the Onward Journey

 

My destination seems somehow vague but assured,

as I stare at my suitcases in the hall.

When I arrive my needs shall be catered for,

but now I must draw together my belongings from life's store.

 

I rummage through drawers and wardrobes to no earthly avail,

as there are more possessions that no longer hold sway.

I cannot go into the night alone with empty hands,

but carry with me earthly treasures to new faraway lands.

 

Echoes of the past I am determined to keep for old time's sake,

images of sunny days of a childhood well spent.

Of my family, friends and favourite places I shall keep,

so that when I am alone I can sit, dream and sleep.

 

Memories happy and sad are carefully arranged,

with tunes and melodies to comfort my soul along the way.

I shall take those treasured thoughts of intimacy,

moments of lovemaking, intense in passion and sublime ecstasy.

 

My heart is filled with anticipation to meet all again,

to hold and cuddle Whiskers and Bess my dear pets.

Knowing that I shall always be loved wherever I may be,

to my ultimate destination with my lover and me.

 

A few poems and stories from books to transport me into delight,

to comfort me when fearful through the long night.

Then I shall pack those images of my dear home land,

in the hope that I shall be led to another promised land.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 17th Jun 2023 17:28

The message in this poem is ambiguous - perhaps intentionally
so since it can refer to a change in a number of ways, leaving
a reader to guess which applies. Not the most comfortable
situation when considering the ultimate possibility.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 17th Jun 2023 12:33

Thanks Keith, much food for thought.
I'm constantly beset by "worries" about what'll happen to all my precious books on all sorts of subjects, when I peg it.
I just hope some student can make good use of them.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 17th Jun 2023 10:37

Oh dear, you have set us all thinking Keith!
I'm now sitting here in the study looking around at my 'bits and pieces' as my wife calls them. Great thought provoking piece.

Didn't the pharaohs do something similar?

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keith jeffries

Sat 17th Jun 2023 10:25

Thank you for all who read this poem and especially to Kevin, John, Stephen G., Clare and MC., for their comments and others for their likes. Kevin you are right about the final journey. You are very perceptive.
Thank you one and all,
Keith

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kJ Walker

Sat 17th Jun 2023 08:03

Hi Keith
Hope you are well.
I'm often guilty of reading too much into your brilliant work, but to me this has a sense of being about a final journey.

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John Botterill

Fri 16th Jun 2023 19:28

Beautiful, Keith. I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 16th Jun 2023 10:52

I sense that the journey will be of deep significance, Keith. The best may be yet to come.

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Clare

Thu 15th Jun 2023 20:22

This is wonderful. It is exactly where I am at the moment as I pack up to leave the country that has been home for so long. I have found it quite sobering to have to decide this that I shall keep and this that I must discard. I really felt a connection with this poem. Thank you, Keith.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Jun 2023 18:33

Bon voyage - whenever and wherever you are set to go! Some
pleasing lines here, thank you.

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