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CHESS KILLING TIME

On a long journey north by train

two young guys in T-shirts and jeans

pored over a plastic boxed set of miniature chess

bought on Ebay for pleasure not gain,

red and white pieces with fiddly pegs in holes,

a small tray incorporated in the base

with conquered plastic spoil lodged there. 

 

Two phones lay ignored

coffees in polystyrene cups growing cold

as the outside flashed by like an unanswered prayer.

One chewed his nails the other squirmed

while more than a hundred miles came and went

no words spoken.  The sun began to give up

over Chesterfield, passengers asleep or seeming intent

while the two boys remained undisturbed

oblivious to all points north. 

 

No one knows if the game was ended

but they left and went on their way,

leaving two cups that were placed with a cold dribble, into a black sack

yet more plastic spoil

never used as evidence or proof of either looking back. 

◄ THE TOASTMASTER'S FLY

FRIDGE FANTASY ►

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raypool

Sun 9th Jul 2023 19:41

Can you imagine watching chess? a bit like school exams I suppose presumably in silence. Thanks for the comment John.

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John F Keane

Sun 9th Jul 2023 12:50

Reminds me of the Soviet Union, where chess was a popular spectator sport.

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raypool

Wed 5th Jul 2023 09:55

Just coming back to thank John Kevin Hugh and Holden for liking this one!

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raypool

Mon 3rd Jul 2023 16:29

Thank you all for the likes Suvendra, Helene, K.Lynn, Aisha, Philippa and Tom , glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you Greg. the mantle of the north hangs heavy. I was thinking I suppose of the sun as witness to the decision making! Another railway poem for the menu.

Thank you Graham. I have a ready lucky dip of poems , lots need the edit button like this one did, Yes, you have hit on a truism there, as time passing in oblivion is a strange non sensation. I was inspired by your communication too, thank you.

Stephen, always nice to hear from you, as it has been some time my end! I did three chess poems of all different aspects but I felt this one had a back story. Where that phrase came from no idea, but I thought i'd leave it in, thanks for picking up on it. The desultory black sack I always found an anti climax of any journey.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 2nd Jul 2023 17:06

'As the outside flashed by like an unanswered prayer'.

I wish I had thought of that one, Ray.

Fascinating story, culminating with the sad but inevitable fate of the two cups.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 1st Jul 2023 23:26

Haha! I hope my gentle nudge didn’t spawn this intriguing piece Ray. I particularly like the juxt between the slow consideration of the game and the rush of the train journey.
Great to see you back. A welcome return.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 1st Jul 2023 22:56

I like this poem, Ray, particularly for some reason "The sun began to give up over Chesterfield". I hope this does not betray any anti-northern bias!

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