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FRIDGE FANTASY

Superfoods dictators of moods

building blocks pyramids of power

all available from your ivory tower

but in the full length mirror complaints

so it's back to the carbohydrates again

the cynical blendingĀ of sugar and fat

the fridge is miraculously never bare

while pretty packets stack up in there

but keep believing nevertheless

cross your heart and hope to die

it's time for yet another confession

a reminder of the sad obsession.

🌷(5)

◄ CHESS KILLING TIME

DEATH ENCAPSULATED ►

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raypool

Thu 13th Jul 2023 10:38

Thanks Reggie's Ghost for bringing that up - the ladies have their own logic which doesn't necessarily coincide. I've been similarly accompanied.

Hi Mark. It's a rather bizarre thing when all the attention should really be focussed on how the young are inheriting a minefield of future problems, while the dietary concerns of us old'uns don't I believe really have that much influence on our future! I think the Greeks knew a thing or two about platitudes..

Ray

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Reggie's Ghost

Wed 12th Jul 2023 14:10

Some good lines in there Ray.

My missus has just started another round of Slimming World. She's driving me mad. Lost 2lb in a week - half of that was wearing lighter clothes to the weigh-in.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 12th Jul 2023 11:50

Ha...this happens to have coincided with my latest health check
by my local health care nurse, and the usual chat about diet.
A subject that gains more importance with the passing years, it
seems. But the Greeks knew a thing or two, with the advice:
Let your food be your medicine, and your medicine be your food.

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raypool

Tue 11th Jul 2023 23:23

Thank you both Stephen and Stephen, not necessarily in that order - haha! - for liking this poem. Cheers.

Ray

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