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DEATH ENCAPSULATED

Released from a capsule

a dark encapsulated death

a cessation an instant of last drawn breath

at the end of a dream that never came true

the skeleton rainbow ahead of arrival

with never a guarantee of  survival

locked into a past and present embrace

a fatal return to a state of grace. 

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◄ FRIDGE FANTASY

BIG BAD FOX ►

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raypool

Mon 24th Jul 2023 22:14

Thanks for the like Stephen.

Thanks Tony, I did some tweaking to this as I know how critical it can be with short poems not to wander off the point . I'm pleased you found it worked.

Ray

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Tony Hill

Sun 23rd Jul 2023 10:53

Three dark couplets, Ray, and very affecting. Sometimes brevity works - it certainly does here. Tony

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