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BIG BAD FOX

In various hutches pods and cages

her poultry world

a commitment based on egg production

in the scuffling shuffling universe

of confined resentment and sensed rages. 

 

Opening her arms feathers fly out,

a confetti confession of love

oblivious to smell of ordure, urine

while her daughter follows in hot pursuit

 

naming not blaming the curious rats

racing and chasing her rabbit for fun

in a harness to stop it running away

which it would if it could,

all endured in a world of thistles and brambles,

a spiky existence in denial of neighbours

and in fear of the big bad fox.  

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◄ DEATH ENCAPSULATED

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raypool

Thu 27th Jul 2023 19:40

Thanks for liking this one Stephen.

I re-read Song of the Battery Hen and it's a delightful ironic piece . Thanks for the comparison. I have the lady in question living next door so I have a fairly abrasive relationship with her after trying to tackle some brambles that came over my side and it's all a bit bizarre, which I think fits in with the poem, I hope!

Ray

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Tony Hill

Wed 26th Jul 2023 14:34

This is an unusual one, Ray. I’ve read it several times. It brought to mind Song of the Battery Hen by Edwin Brock if I remember correctly. I especially like the last two lines of the first stanza. Tony

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