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GOING OVER THE TOP

My hands gripping the bars

legs doing all the work

on that open road

flanked by summer hedges

bristling witnesses to my effort

no other traffic

a sky defining a clear horizon 

raced uphill to meet me

as I went over the top

to see patchwork fields. 

 

That's how it was

and now my hands rest lightly

on a steering wheel

through glass I can still make out

those same contours

but now unfamiliar signage

 

for Solstice Park, blunt buildings

a grotesque crouching Neanderthal man

punching a sky that had raced

to meet me before,

tarmac guidance to eateries

 

an affront to taste, a reminder

not so much of the past

but of an overstated present. 

🌷(6)

◄ BIG BAD FOX

THE DRESSING ROOM AT THE FLORAL HALL HORNSEA ►

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raypool

Thu 10th Aug 2023 19:01

Thanks Mark for that swathe of nostalgia - so much of it within my own memories. I was sold a Phillips Jaguar - their best model for 10/- after the Lenton went ! I took that around North Wales with my brother in the sixties. He was a bastard on the hills with his Falcon. I didn't follow the racing really although several friends had enviable bikes, like ASGillott and Rotrax. They felt so light. I have a Roberts now with a 531ST frame good as gold on the roads. Sounds like we are the same age.
I'll get my coat.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 6th Aug 2023 18:06

Telboy - your comment is well taken. Ironically, it was while riding my last bike - a Condor - that I suffered a sudden front tyre
"blow-out" that sent me crashing sideways on to unforgiving
tarmac, resulting in ongoing lumbar spinal stenosis. But I still
have an indoor bike as a reminder of more active days out on
the streets as I approach my 80th birthday.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 6th Aug 2023 18:01

Great recall Ray. My late brother had a Phillips bike which
he rode from his army camp near Newbury to visit family at
free weekends. Amazing to recall how many British bike and accessory manufacturers there were back then. Here's a
recall of my bike and its British origins, some added during ownership..
Frame: Reynolds 531; Bars and Brakes: GB; Chain: Reynolds;
Double Chainwheel: Williams; Gears: Cyclo-Benelux; Hubs:
Racelite; HP wheel rims/tubes/tyres: Dunlop; Saddle: Brooks; Pump: Bluemel; Pedals: Raleigh. And the Raleigh catalogue
proudly proclaimed that the machine was famously endorsed by Reg Harris, no less...remember?! I was a great fan of the magazine "Sporting Cyclist" - published by cycling visionary J.B. Wadley, bringing Continental road racing and its
participants to UK enthusiasts with some great B/W photos
of the "greats" of those days, like Coppi and Bobet, as well
as the brave Brits like Brian Robinson trying their luck across
the Channel. Pioneers who began the journey to the current
UK success in the big foreign races today....a very long way indeed from what was very much a "Cinderella" sport in the UK back then.

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raypool

Sun 6th Aug 2023 11:37

Hi Telboy. Yes, you make a good case - they are cycle centric there and i'm sure cycling is safer on the whole with more respect shown. Of course here the impetus seems to be for more egocentric tendencies as if speed is always important for bikes.
Ray

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Telboy

Sat 5th Aug 2023 22:40

It's a pity more people don't cycle today, we'd be a lot fitter and healthier. I visit Netherlands every year, you hardly see anyone with a stick or in an electric buggy, but you do see people well into their 70s and 80s on bikes.

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raypool

Sat 5th Aug 2023 20:21

Thanks Stephen, how could I disagree? Let's put on our camouflage outifts and go back over the top to the past!

Hi Mark: same hymn sheet of course! I think the Super Lenton came in blue, mine was green, but I would have been green with envy at yours, I think it came with the gear - mine had the one sprocket and a fixed wheel, but I pestered my dad to have the wheel "dished" to accept a derailleur. I got a benelux too.. No double chainrings in those days . I fitted a spoke mileometer, nice tick. I got one again on ebay, still getting about.....

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 5th Aug 2023 18:26

Ray - I was "with you" in more ways than one - also owning a
Raleigh (I think mine was a Super Lenton model...long before I
progressed to Holdsworth and Condor in later years).
How easily the memories of those uncrowded roads come back
to me from my Wiltshire/Somerset border youth....not least the
long "pull" up Bowden Hill to home above the historic village
of Lacock. I believe it's a venue for hill-climbs now. It was
a point of personal honour not to dismount as I pushed my Cyclo-Benelux (British made!) derailleur to its big-cog limit. In
fact, looking back, the whole bike was British made: frame, chain, gear, wheels, tyres, brakes, saddle, and even the pump!
Those were the days, my friend!!

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 5th Aug 2023 14:11

The present is overstated in many respects. Takes us back to a more rewarding, and less crowded, time.

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raypool

Fri 4th Aug 2023 22:06

Thanks Jennifer and Holden for reading and liking.

Mark, I can feel you were with me on this trip. Perhaps as I did you might remember grass cutters with long slow sickles trimming the banks, no high viz of course. On that particular trip I had my trusty Raleigh Lenton (cost £17 from Halfords) which I had fitted with a 3 speed Sturmey Archer. Gulp.

Many thanks Tony. I retain this early event on the A303 as a special moment at 16.

Uilleam, i've driven up to Southport quite a few times, a long way for a one night gig and back! That long level road gives the long view over lowlands I recall. Ah the Sturmey Archer, you had to stop pedalling to change gear.

Thanks folks. Ray

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Aug 2023 09:33

In the 50's I begged my dad to let me have his old "sit up and beg" bike. It had 3 sturmey archer gears, (which I believe are still in production) and I persuaded him to fit it with drop bars which for me were super cool. I used to go for 20 or 30 miles no problem with my mate.
Ah the summer hedges on the Southport road.

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Tony Hill

Fri 4th Aug 2023 07:11

Really like this one, Ray, and especially the first verse - ‘bristling witness to my effort’. Great image. Tony

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Aug 2023 23:00

The click of a changing derailleur gear, the smell of freshly
mown grass and newly laid tar on a country road are with me
still a lifetime later when I'm fortunate to be able to enjoy the
comfort and protection of a solidly built "automatic" on much
busier highways and byways. Thanks for the opportunity to
take this trip with you.

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