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Malevolent.

The malevolent prefer

To skirt around the soul, 

Lest it should reveal

The resident rot

Gift-wrapped in

Leaves of gold, 

Hoping to convince

For just a day more

That the emperor

Marches fully-clothed...

◄ Eventide.

Avoidance. ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 7th Aug 2023 00:16

Thank you so much, Uilleam, I'm always grateful for your comments! 😊

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 5th Aug 2023 11:28

Thank you Holden,
Well put and straight to the point.

"...the emperor / Marches fully-clothed..."

Such a lot of them about these days.😉

Holden Moncrieff

Fri 4th Aug 2023 20:35

Thank you so much, Jennifer, your kind words are a source of encouragement! 😊

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jennifer Malden

Fri 4th Aug 2023 15:51

Fantastic, and wonderful use of words. .... the resident rot gift-wrapped in leaves of gold. Really good writing.

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 29th Jul 2023 01:52

Thank you so much, John, I truly appreciate your kind comment! 😎

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John Botterill

Sat 29th Jul 2023 00:34

Superb poem, Holden. Neat but hard hitting. 😎

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