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Burley Road

As a student I sought accommodation,

To fight Yorkshire winters on my own,

A vital part of my education,

Apt preparation for what life has shown:

A two up, two down on Burley Road.

 

Back-to-backs in tight formation,

In narrow streets deprived of light,

Where desperate families in a constant fight,

Showed cobble-stoned determination,

Selling their souls just to make ends meet,

To eke out a living on Leeds mean streets.

 

Though I have moved around, from place to place.

I have lived my life on Burley Road,

Clinging grimly on, in survival mode,

With snowstorms to battle and bills to face,

I turned my back on the human race,

And huddled in front of Life’s fireplace.

◄ The Diving Tree

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John Botterill

Mon 24th Jul 2023 07:33

Thank you so much, Uilleam. I started out with a description and stumbled into a metaphor. Nothing much has changed in half a century, has it?
Working people get by on pride and not much else 😕

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 23rd Jul 2023 21:53

A cracking line John: "...cobble-stoned determination"...ordinary folk around me every day, just getting on with the hard reality of life.

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John Botterill

Sun 23rd Jul 2023 15:03

Thank you so much, KJ, Stephen, Clare and Greg for your wonderfully supportive comments. It means such a lot to me.
It is 45 years since I lived in Leeds. I enjoyed it (mostly). Still, experiences shape us, don't they? And the fight to make ends meet goes on in these places.
Thanks Nigel, Manish, Tom, Tony and Reggies ghost for the likes. 😀

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Greg Freeman

Sun 23rd Jul 2023 09:36

Very good, John. A quintessential northern poem - an anti-Betjeman one, if you like!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Jul 2023 07:49

Outstanding, John. I love 'cobble-stoned determination'. This sort of experience certainly makes you grateful for a bit more comfort later on.

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Clare

Sat 22nd Jul 2023 19:43

Brilliant! 😁

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kJ Walker

Sat 22nd Jul 2023 08:30

A two up two down? Luxury.
There were 7 of us living in a cardboard box.

Joking aside, keeping warm on a tight budget is a harsh reality. I can well remember fighting for a place near the fire in a frozen cold house.

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