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The Calder Valley

I search across this ancient valley,

Through the mists of time to a distant shore,

Counting the scars of industrial toil,

Of abandoned mills not needed anymore.

 

This land was carved out in the Ice Age,

With huge rocky boulders at its core.

So, what we often call our heritage,

Was erected by insects, just like me,

And lasted just a mere pinprick of time;

An acne grown on this landscape sublime.

 

For millions of years this rain has fallen,

For millions of years the sun has shone,

This place will thrive when these buildings are gone.

Our time is fleeting; Happy Valley lives on!

 

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◄ This Train...

From a glint in your eye ►

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 15th Aug 2023 08:49

A lovely poem, John, and cleverly rhymed. It shows our fleeting presence on this planet, the 'pinprick'.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 14th Aug 2023 05:44

It's just pure bliss to read your poems, John B. Another masterpiece to your collection. I loved the description and vocabulary.
Thank you.🌻

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John Botterill

Mon 14th Aug 2023 04:35

Yes, I have, Greg. Unusually for me. Fabulous descriptive poetry, if a tad bleak. Hughes was a Mytholmroyd man initially and fished in the Rochdale Canal (hence 'Pike'). Scout Hill was his backdrop, he said
Thanks Greg 😀

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Greg Freeman

Sun 13th Aug 2023 23:52

Recommend Ted Hughes's poetic guide to the Calder valley in 'Remains of Elmet'. Have you read it, John?

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