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HUNTER'S MOON

Relish your dark woundings

prime your pellets

check your powders

for soon comes the hunter's moon

 

Polish your stock

let your barrel breathe oil

make slick your cloths

practise footfalls of stealth

for soon comes the hunter's moon

 

while fen and forest

sweat and furrow

while fur frets in the burrow

hold fast your dreams for now

for soon comes the hunter's moon

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◄ MY MUMMY

HAVING A DAY OUT ►

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raypool

Tue 31st Oct 2023 22:34

Many thanks for all the readers who liked this: Red Brick, Hugh, New Shoes, Holden and Helene.

Thanks for that Graham - I sweated myself over those lines as a matter of fact.

I'm pleased you liked this Greg - it's good when the moon sails free to show itself all griss to the hunter.

Thanks for your appreciation Stephen..

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 28th Oct 2023 08:14

Superb, Ray. Atmospheric and slightly disturbing.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 27th Oct 2023 16:28

Excellent refrain, Ray. Seasonal words that get us in the mood for Halloween as well.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 27th Oct 2023 16:19

V3 is a classic Ray. words you wish you'd written yourself!

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