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THAMES SIDE TRYST

Through the watery wasteland where Surrey

touches the fringes of Middlesex to create

reservoirs, distant impressions of gravel workings

a skeletal landscape pock marked by bungalows

nudged by water weary boats shunted and left

with curtains drawn, I drove past purbind vistas

where my memories mixed from the old palettes

a pale wash and weariness:

Laleham, Shepperton, Charlton, Halliford

 

searching a route to where I was to meet a friend;

we met after so many years, two careers

feasting on music now watching the embers float away

to tea and Thames, our thoughts flowing together

pinned down by time's excrescences and wild weather. 

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raypool

Sun 17th Dec 2023 15:22

Thanks for the likes Red Brick Keshner, Mark, Hugh and Holden.

I do like a bit of Betjeman Stephen! Naming of places helps . Thanks for the compliment.

I'm glad I sparked off your interest Carlton. It's a very low lying area and one where I grew up, so it has that nostalgic element. Excrescences is a fairly ugly word, and age brings it as a gift in many cases!

Thanks for looking in Greg. I live in a bungalow but it is tucked in each side by two. I find them redolent of the seaside and often marked by gnomes and pixies and the like. The reservoirs are mysterious places to me, but with the effort of walking them there again is another world. The ones near Staines where I lived were heavily defended during WW2 by large artillery guns. Imagine a minor Moehne dam disaster on your own doorstep!

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th Dec 2023 20:55

You paint a wonderful picture of an overlooked landscape, Ray. Although I was often frustrated to find that I could not overlook the tops of fenced-off reservoirs! I love the bungalows and water-weary boats.

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David RL Moore

Thu 14th Dec 2023 06:31

I found myself pouring over the map to discover exactly where you may have taken tea.

"time's excrescences" summons many interesting images, an inspired coupling.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Dec 2023 21:27

Betjeman territory but the verse distinctively yours, Ray. A rich poem indeed.

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