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It's OK?

Jeez!

I can't hear the telly 

for your bubbling belly!

Stop being horrible! You know I get IBS

Aye, Irritating Belly Sounds!

I laughed

She didn't 

Her cheeks glazed with cherry red

But, also, the weight loss?

And, you need to eat more! 

You're like a mouse lately. 

Eeek, eeek, She mimics (badly)

She turns, cups my face in her hands, 

kisses me

But, there's a teary sheen to her eyes…

 

That's all I can eat. Sorry.

It's OK

I just feel a bit sick

It's OK. 

My wedding ring's fell off again

I slide it back on

Wondering if it's metaphorical 

Wondering if I can do more

Wondering if we'll ever find 

our way back to before

It's OK. I'm sure it'll fit again soon.

I kiss her hand

Then wander over to the window

Outside seems different somehow 

 

But, the sky is still there

The sun still shines

Clouds drift 

Birds sing

The grass is still green


 

The day looks normal 

Hope

◄ A Midwinter Daydream

Nothing but bored. ►

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julie callaghan

Fri 19th Jan 2024 23:20

Feeling bad as it’s been quite a while since I checked in, but you what I mean when I post 😪🌈 sending hugs

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 18th Jan 2024 17:53

Thank you for your generous words Manish, John, Stephen & Uilleam. Much appreciated. I only wish it was just a poem. But, hopefully, normal days will return 🤞

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 18th Jan 2024 11:15

Thank you Stephen.
Very moving indeed.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 18th Jan 2024 08:16

A deeply moving poem, Stephen.

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John Coopey

Wed 17th Jan 2024 23:11

Deep sadness in life's little moments.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 17th Jan 2024 18:01

Stephen, I could feel my heart ache as I read this poem, the words, conversation and feelings put out in this is really contagious. I'm in a loss of words.

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