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LETTING IN THE LIGHT

Those who live and die in poverty

have no less a story to tell

than those with means who are in the light.

for the poor cast the long shadow

demanding a closer look.

 

Theirs are the stories that like the wild wind

drift away and would be gone

while those with means most easily seen

make occasion for theirs to be told. 

◄ CUTTING MY CLOTH

OUR HALL ►

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raypool

Tue 9th Apr 2024 15:19

Thanks so much to Tom, Hugh, Aisha, Holden, Reggie's Ghost, Tim, Landi and Auracle for your liking the poem.

Cheers Stephen, I'm more comfortable with less words to be honest!

Hi David, points well made as always in support. It's gratifying to get a last line to deliver, as in effect is a "punch line" for a comedian. I love your term cryfest, didn't that start with Princess Diana as I remember with the rallying call of Blair of course at his most sincerest.

Ray

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David RL Moore

Sun 7th Apr 2024 08:07

Hi Ray,

I like the use of "make occasion for theirs to be told" I have spoken of my belief in the vanity of biographical funerals arranged by the pre-corpse for their own exaltation, The rich are in position to behave in this manner, on occasion even building themselves Palaces.

The poor whose lives are often more worthy and undoubtedly more interesting would be lucky to get a bench in a dog shit Park.

Food for thought Ray...we await the next State sponsored cry-fest with a provisional cringe.

David.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 07:01

More truth in these nine lines than in many a voluminous tome, Ray.

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