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The Appeal of The Licensing Laws

 

The Blood of Christ

in B&Q,

with tools and joist

their job to do.

 

The empty pews

the wine, the bread,

pastoral views,

across the dead.

 

The licensed hours

of temple aisles,

the plastic flowers.

the checkout smiles.

 

The collared throats

of men withdrawn,

Luther's notes

nailed up at dawn.

 

Between the two

It's hard to tell,

which, if we do

is nearer hell.

 

Yet I who have

no want of God,

am less inclined

to tend the Sod...

 

than sit a while

in silent thought,

and contemplate

the things unbought.

 

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David RL Moore

Fri 12th Apr 2024 09:10

Thanks for the comments and likes.

Penguin, I'm partial to neither but less inclined to worship at the altar of materialism.

David

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Ray Miller

Thu 11th Apr 2024 08:04

Enjoyed the read very much .
Between the two

It's hard to tell,

which, if we do

is nearer hell.

Fine stanza.



Yet I who have

no want of God,

am less inclined

to tend the Sod...

Not sure whether you're expressing a lack of enthusiasm for gardening or organised religion.

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David RL Moore

Thu 11th Apr 2024 07:39

Thanks for the comment MC and to those who sent flowers.

Personally I'd rather sit quietly in a building constructed or a landscape evolved and contemplate a god I don't believe in than worship at the altar of the gods of greed and desire whose existance is beyond all reasonable doubt.

All you might need to sacrifice your god exists on the shelves of the new temples, even the hammers and nails.

David

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 10th Apr 2024 16:45

I enjoyed the wry content and the rhythm employed in the
construction!

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