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ON WATCH

It is not uncommon to be eighty

and never to have seen the aurora borealis

but now, primed by a news and weather alert

I stand to see if it might happen. 

 

A belt of translucent high cloud holds firm

above a street light under a gash of dark trees

but no aurora. 

A scent of sleeping blossom has me in thrall

and on the ridge of my kitchen roof

the silky silhouette of a cat catches my eye

 

seeing both its ears I know it regards me

without curiosity while my world waits. 

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raypool

Mon 13th May 2024 21:56

Thanks one and all for your likes, Tom, Hugh, Stephen, Aisha, Holden, Helene, David and Landi.

I was a bit disappointed I suppose Stephen, so the next night I though sod it I won't bother. There's always the future! Thanks for the appreciation. My cat never jumped over the moon by the way.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 12th May 2024 08:11

Excellent poem (and title), Ray. I missed it as well and there was no cat. Nice new moon though. Maybe tonight.....

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