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THE OPEN ROAD

There is that road again somewhere in Buckinghamshire

I visit it often in my mind

astride the motorbike a resolute companion,

 

we are plunging down

then surging up the hollow

caressing the curves of the road

by the grip of the throttle

to a now forgotten destination

that takes us through a mystery of trees

in a dark unsuspecting wood

and then the open vista,

all this happening under peaks of pleasure

a slow release that I still cherish on the map of memory. 

 

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raypool

Mon 10th Jun 2024 20:35

Thanks all for your liking the poem Tom, Hugh, Stephen G, Stephen A, Aisha ,Holden and Tim.

Keith it's nice to be on that wavelength, moments of comfort in a changing world!

Oh yes, Mark. I remember your mention of the Raleigh in a cycling poem I posted here - that whirr you talk of was a particular sound from the early years that seems to have been silenced by the later versions. Possibly the sprockets and chains (always Renolds) and cyclo I think . Two wheels was the ultimate thrill we know that much!

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 7th Jun 2024 16:24

An evocative jolt to my own memory of negotiating the lanes and
byways of rural 1950s Wiltshire on my Raleigh Super Lenton
Sports bike, the whirr of the derailleur gears replacing your
bike's own exhaust note.

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keith jeffries

Thu 6th Jun 2024 00:06

Ray,
Thank you for this as I too often travel in my own mind to places which keep on reminding me of my past and their significance.
Keith

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