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The Last Train

We stood on the bridge watching 

the train approach 

The steam dampening our faces

as it passed under

It was warm, then cold

I grabbed my brothers hand

and we ran to the other side

But, the train had gone,

along with my brother.

The imprint of his hand 

still lay in mine

But time had taken them both.

I stood there for days, weeks, 

Perhaps, months

Perhaps, I'm still there

Perhaps, a part of me always will be.

Waiting for a seat on that train

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 2nd Jun 2024 11:48

Thank you Graham, & Stephen for taking time to comment, much appreciated. And thank you for the likes Trevor, Manish, Holden & Aisha 🌷

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 2nd Jun 2024 08:27

Great writing, Stephen. Atmospheric and moving.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 31st May 2024 18:06

I really like this piece Stephen. A bunch of my old trainspotting friends recently met on our old bring to re-live old times. Sadly no steam!!

Lovely work

G

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