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Little Ted

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Little Ted likes to bounce his ball 

on the beach

So did Billy

But he was killed just out of reach

 

Little Ted likes to watch the seagulls 

Swooping overhead 

But, Billy remembers them picking

At the dead

 

Little Ted likes to run into the dunes

To hide & play

Billy still hides from the machine gun’s

Deathly spray

 

But, little Ted doesn't like the sand

Between his toes

And, Billy can remember it blocking

His throat & nose

 

But, little Ted likes making sand castles 

With his bucket & spade!

And Billy thinks…

And Billy thinks 

It was worth the price that he paid

 

And Little Ted goes home with

An ice cream in his hand

And, Billy, once again, fades

Into time's eternal sand.

 

DDayremebrance

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 7th Jun 2024 17:48

Thank you very much for your wonderful comments Graham, Keith, Patricia & Tom! I think we need to remember now, more than anytime I can remember!
And thanks for the Likes 😊🌷

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Tom Doolan

Wed 5th Jun 2024 16:47

A very emotive and poignant reflection Stephen.

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Patricia Ziel

Wed 5th Jun 2024 13:06

Thank you for remembering the fallen ones like this; the imagery is clear and pierces straight through my heart. As I look at that picture of the most pivotal day in WW2, my eyes tear up. May we all be reminded of the price paid for our well being.

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keith jeffries

Wed 5th Jun 2024 10:07

Stephen,
Not a poem from your usual repetoire but poignant as my mind went to the beach at Gaza and to Dunkirk and all the travesty of war. The illustration is also a firm reminder of the D Day landings which took the lives of so many men. A poem which is both topical and historical; a reminder to us all that freedom is bought at a high price.
Thanks for this,
Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 5th Jun 2024 08:40

A very effective allegory told in such a poignant way Stephen!
This resonated with me due to visiting the war beaches on our way back from holiday one year. It was bright sunshine and lots of people/children cavorting in the sea. I could see only soldiers floating! It stays with me.
Good work sir! G

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