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MUSCLE MEMORY

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From trembling thin arms to thunderous cries,
A childhood stained with hunger's cruel guise,
Clinging to mother, seeking her solace tight,
In a world where shadows cast a daunting fright.
Constant threats and abuse, such a heavy weight,
Youth stolen away, no chance to abate, too late,
Billy the eldest boy, burdened beyond his years,
In grey short pants,seeking  resilience through tears.
Socks pulled up, as a symbol of strength and will,
Make do and mend, finding solace in the skill
Of training Kes to climb the hills of uplifted air,
When cycling to school he'd hidehis  eyes
As the insults fly, pierced the night sky,
His stuttering mocked, his determination grew,
Escape to the books, where his dreams come true,
Each day a torment faced, his courage never died.
so many young ones so burdened, yet still so strong,
In the fierce flames of adversity, he began to belong,
For deep in Billy's muscle memory lies the key,
To rise above struggles and set yourself free.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 3rd Aug 2024 18:14

Adversity has always been a facet of British working life, with
centuries of endured slow burning evolution forging the often
unacknowledged triumph of the will and spirit. It has been
said that Waterloo was won on the playing fields of Eton. The
reality is that victory was obtained by the undefeated spirit
of the ranks about whom Wellington was said to comment
"I don't know what they do to the enemy, but by God, they frighten me" (or words to that effect).
Even to this day, we see evidence of undervaluing their
worth, with the chattering twits so quick to place the world and
its dog ahead of them, even in their own land. From "Kes"
there was a move in the right direction with the tale of "Billy Elliot". A bit more of that approach would be both deserved
and welcome.

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John Marks

Fri 2nd Aug 2024 21:54

Hey, cheers Ray. I've always (since 2009 on WoL) admired the clarity and intelligence of your comments and observations. You were never afraid to be wrong but, were, in fact,, invariably right. Maybe it was because of your musical education, your grasp of timbre and tone, I dunno. Anyways, thanks Ray.

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raypool

Fri 2nd Aug 2024 20:12

Excellent John. Kes was made during that period of the Wednesday Play with subjects of some heft causing some controversy re the using of bystanders as actors, which Ken Loach pursued in his gritty documentary style. In some ways there is less spine today to present the truth ungarnished but you have revealed the underbelly of what we face today. It has the power to move us (I hope).

Ray

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John Marks

Fri 2nd Aug 2024 18:41

Thank you very much David.

"Have you noticed that anyone who talks about the problems facing white working-class kids is instantly accused of starting a culture war? Talk about trans kids and the media will be knocking on your door to commission a documentary. Talk about the specific problems facing children of West Indian or Bangladeshi heritage and the chattering classes will be all ears. But so much as mutter the phrase ‘white working-class’ and you’ll be viewed as iffy. Here comes another culture warrior stirring up racial tensions, the right-on will cry. They might even call you racist.

For example, just 18 per cent of white pupils on free school meals achieved Grade 4 or higher in GCSE English and maths, whereas the average for pupils on free meals is 23 per cent. A paltry 16 per cent of white kids on free meals get places at university, compared with 59 per cent of black African kids on free meals, 59 per cent of Bangladeshi kids on free meals, and 32 per cent of black Caribbean kids on free meals."

"https://www.spiked-online.com/2021/06/22/white-working-class-kids-are-casualties-of-the-culture-war/

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David RL Moore

Fri 2nd Aug 2024 13:55

When I see, hear and otherwise witness the adversity that many endure and subsequently overcome I feel pathetic in my own complaints.

Such lives are inspirational and a reminder to those of us who struggle in varied degrees that it is important to keep going.

That said, it's still bloody difficult. We should therefore look out for those who for whatever reason may shield their troubles from others. The result of that strategy can be a miserable place of no return.

Fine words in your writing John,

David

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