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In Gratitude

 

We’ve known each other all our lives.

You’ve been there for me day and night,

every minute, every hour,

without me even trying.

 

I have taken you for granted, all the time,

and I am sorry.

I only know I need you when you’re running short,

shallow, caught or less.

 

I’ve seen you lend yourself

to other chests, to fading days,

dying lights. Heard you roar,

gasp and stumble, putt-putt tumble,

rasp and tremble.

First to rumble, last to leave.

 

That night of a thousand years?

She had no idea you were there,

how hard the working

when the rest of her was folding in

but I was watching, marvelling

at syncopating rhythms,

at the bidding of a bellows.

 

We’ve been together every second,

most without me knowing.

I owe you everything.

I have grown in your presence.

 

So this is yours, my offering.

A quiet prize, nightly heed,

I let you lead each gratitude.

Without you, I’d be nothing.

 

 

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Laura Taylor

Mon 12th Aug 2024 10:24

Howdy Ray - it's physically impossible to breathe in and out at the same time 😉 Or did you mean something else?

Anyway, good to hear from you. I'm grand thanks and hope you are too.

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raypool

Fri 9th Aug 2024 19:51

A very affecting poem Laura. Inside and outside yourself at one and the same time does it for me. Keep well!

Ray

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Laura Taylor

Fri 9th Aug 2024 10:58

Hello David - cheers. I do a gratitude meditation each night before sleep, and my breath is always first on the list. I liked your poem too.

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David RL Moore

Fri 9th Aug 2024 05:55

"Tempus Fugit" Laura,

Great words and ideas....nice to see you here.

David

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