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BIRD WATCHING

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I was sitting beneath a magnolia tree in the park today,

I watched as a bird landed on a branch full of large, leathery leaves and pink flowers,

How it landed with its wings spread out proud,

Those elliptical, alluring wings that shame the rainbow,

Left me feeling mirthful, 

And I watched as it's tiny talons,

Firmly perched on the green,wet boughs

With a grip so tight that my heart fluttered.

 

It looked down towards me,

And its eyes,

Those brown eyes with shades of ocean blue,

Like the earth and the sky affixed,

Bore into mine with such a gaze,

That I could feel the tranquility it embodied,

The calmness within its tiny body,

And the freedom engulfed me,

And so I rose,

Like a human begotten wings,

And looked up to the sky,

Only to see the bird fly away,

And it was so small, as it became one with the sky.

 

 

 

 

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◄ OPEN EYES

A QUIET WISH ►

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Naomi

Sat 14th Dec 2024 04:39

Thank you Marla for your kind words.

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Naomi

Sat 14th Dec 2024 04:38

Thank you Trevor. And yes, sometimes in our busy lives we may overlook the simple yet profound beauty and importance of the natural world around us.

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Marla Joy

Fri 13th Dec 2024 22:42

I like this one best. Marla

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Dec 2024 18:20

Lovely. Sometimes we take nature for granted. We really shouldn't - as this shows.

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Naomi

Fri 13th Dec 2024 09:54

Indeed we do Uilleam.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 13th Dec 2024 09:12

Lovely Naomi.
We get such pleasure from feeding the birds in winter. We buy them dried worms.

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Naomi

Fri 13th Dec 2024 03:20

Thanks Branwell!

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branwell kent

Fri 13th Dec 2024 02:21

Good Poem

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