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Will they remember me

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It's strange to think of where the ripple will stop when i die
i don't think its a big pond
but i ponder what my old school friends would say
"what a shame"
and go about their day
would i pop into their mind a decade away?
would any of them have any regrets and wanted me to stay?
I won't know so i don't know why i fill my head with such questions
maybe sit by my graveside and tell me the answers
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Hélène

Sat 4th Jan 2025 20:12

Imagery of an individual's life as a ripple in a pond, beautiful.

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Marla Joy

Sat 4th Jan 2025 19:14

Luna, I think we all wonder about these things. Well expressed.

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Tom

Sat 4th Jan 2025 14:15

A universal thought that everyone has considered at one point or another. 👌

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