HERITAGE LONG LOST second time round for this one

 

 

I have an overwhelming sense

of something missing,

 

a sense of loss -

 

perhaps a memory long gone.

 

A sense once shared across the generations,

by those that went before -

and - maybe - by those who follow on.

 

A sense that lets the spoken word fall silent,

while shared thoughts pass

through time and space,

revealing secret leyland traces,

revealing secret hidden places,

where silent, padding, ancient feet

seek out a way to meet and greet

 

                                        their children's children.

 

 

inspired by Aboriginal   'song lines'

                                                                    August  2022

                                                                                      

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Flyntland

Tue 14th Jan 2025 11:36

Aisha, You took the time to read and like my poem, Thank you, I appreciate my flower.

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Flyntland

Sun 12th Jan 2025 16:08

Thank you Rolph

Your first impression was indeed the right one - having seen a thought-provoking documentary some years ago, about the more primitive way of Aboriginal life I feel that they appear to have an extra sense.
They could find their way to places that they had never been to and find water that they did not know was there and people who were not where they were supposed to be.
I am convinced that somewhere along the line, we have lost a 'something', but I don't know what it is.
We are determined to race forward, but we should stop for a while and think back.
Some animals still retain an ability that we do not understand,
Following the stars or following scent has been given as an explanation but that does not wash and does not cover their intuitive knowledge.
Instinct? Maybe, whatever it is we must once have had it and now lost it.

Oh! I am rabbiting on, sorry, who am I to try to understand?

Rolph David

Sun 12th Jan 2025 14:22

Hello Flyntland,

Wonderful lines!
I interpreted your poem based on Aboriginal song lines and was going to post it here until I read your personal story about it.
I refrained immediately, hahaha...

Great work anyway!
Cheerio,
Rolph

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Flyntland

Sat 11th Jan 2025 13:16

my grateful thanks to RBK. Hugh Stephen G and Holden.

I have described this piece as being inspired by aboriginal 'Song Lines' and it was.
But it is reinforced by my experience of keeping animals (are we so different?)
As a small child I was taken by bus to a well-known beauty spot about a 3/4 of an hour bus drive away from our home. The dog came with us but as was her way, she ran off while we were there. We had to come home without her - intending to go back the next day. During the night she made her way home - crossing countless roads and never having walked the rout before, we found her, exhausted, waiting by the back door.

An even more impressive journey was made by a collie, sold by a farmer in the south of England to a farmer in Scotland. Two weeks later the collie made its way back to its original owner in the south.

Another example was a German Shepherd of mine who, my daughter tells me, always knew when I would be home no matter where I had been and expected or not.

Who can doubt that somewhere along the line that "Something is missing"

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