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THE TORCH OF TIME

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A grandmother's gaze,  

Discerning yet soft, like dusk settling on the earth,  

A mood both perplexing and warm,  

Questions suspended in the air,  

Begging to be heard  

By youthful, open ears.  

Brown, green, blue eyes—  

All belonging to her,  

All resonating within her,  

Each holding stories untold,  

Whispers of time woven in her veins.  

 

Wisdom gathered through the years,  

A quiet accumulation of dusty data,  

Moments collected, like beads on a string,  

A sharp hawk's torch burning,  

Not with anger, but with clarity—  

A light that pierces the fog,  

Revealing the truths we refuse to see.  

 

In her silence, there's power,  

In her words, a thousand years echo,  

The weight of love and loss,  

Of joy and sorrow,  

All wrapped in the folds of her knowing smile.  

 

She doesn't need to speak—  

Her presence is enough,  

A quiet force that shapes the world,  

One glance, onetouch, one word at a time.  

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Marla Joy

Fri 17th Jan 2025 17:44

Naomi, Another Wow! Marla

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Naomi

Fri 17th Jan 2025 09:32

True John. With age comes the chance to learn from past mistakes, celebrate achievements, and adapt to changing circumstances.

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John Coopey

Fri 17th Jan 2025 08:52

“Them As lives longest learns most” as they say here.

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Naomi

Thu 16th Jan 2025 11:51

Thank you Auracle. I appreciate it.

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Naomi

Thu 16th Jan 2025 11:49

Thanks Uilleam!

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Auracle

Thu 16th Jan 2025 10:40

This is meaningful poetry with value.

It's hard for YouTube to get me there.

Thanks.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 16th Jan 2025 08:35

Thanks, Naomi.
Your last two stanzas are beautiful.
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