BORN OF DUST AND SUN

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A land stretches bare before my eyes,  

woven with golden grass, tough from time.  

Scattered thorns crown stick-thin trees,  

silent watchers in the heat’s slow climb.  

 

To the left, an old acacia sways,  

wide and worn, its branches home  

to birds that hum forgotten songs,  

soft against the air’s dry moan.  

 

Green fights brown in a losing war,  

choking under the dust-filled sky.  

Yet in the heart, an ostrich moves,  

its feathers stirred, its footsteps light.  

 

The sun hangs low, a molten eye,  

pulling shadows long and thin.  

Gazelles flicker, weightless ghosts,  

their dance a whisper on the wind.  

 

A lone jackal lingers near,  

ears sharp, its hunger still—  

watching, waiting, reading signs,  

as life bends but never breaks.

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poetry

◄ FEBRUARY'S FLIGHT

THE CRACK IN THE SHELL ►

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Naomi

Tue 4th Feb 2025 07:22

I really appreciate that Trevor. Thank you

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Trevor Alexander

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 21:52

Such beautiful language, and it flows so well. Not a single wasted word, but those used convey a deep connection. Thanks for sharing this Naomi.

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Naomi

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 18:35

Thank you Holden ☺️

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 17:56

A brilliant poem, Naomi, rich in beautiful description, and very evocative! 💐

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Naomi

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 16:52

Thanks Tom!

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Tom

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 16:30

Fantastic, I loved the imagery and the final line is perfect.

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Naomi

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 16:28

Thank you Tom!

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Naomi

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 16:28

Thank you Flyntland. I am so glad you found the poem beautiful. Poetry has a way of offering glimpses into unseen worlds and leaving a lasting impression.
I'll gladly share more pieces that evoke the same feeling in the future 🙂

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Tom Doolan

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 11:29

A beautiful descriptive poem. 🙂

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Flyntland

Mon 3rd Feb 2025 09:46

This poem is so beautiful -"as life bends but never breaks" says it all.
This is a land that I have never seen, and never will, but I have been given a glimpse that both intrigues and excites.

Please - more of the same. thank you.

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