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THE CRACK IN THE SHELL

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A fragile dance on eggshell ground

I tread so light, without a sound.

Your moods, a storm I must appease

My own heart silenced, put at ease.

 

Each whispered word, a careful art

To shield your easily-bruised heart.

I build a wall to hold me in

Lest my true feelings cause a din.

 

But gentle steps and muted sighs

Don't quench the ache behind my eyes.

My own emotions, left unfelt

A heavy burden, slowly dealt.

 

For in this act of constant care

My own soul withers in despair.

Tiptoeing 'round, I lose my way

And find my own heart starts to fray.

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◄ BORN OF DUST AND SUN

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Naomi

Fri 7th Feb 2025 06:43

Thank you for your kind words Flyntland. It means a lot to me that the poem spoke to you.
You're right. It's funny how those old ideas about women still stick around.
Even if nobody says them out loud anymore.
I appreciate you bringing that up.

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Naomi

Fri 7th Feb 2025 06:39

Wow, Thank you Marla☺️

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Flyntland

Thu 6th Feb 2025 21:44

This poem is so well written and it will touch a raw nerve in many who read it,

My faith school told us that "Women were born to suffer" It was also common knowledge that if a man was unfaithful to his wife it was her fault for not being interesting enough.
But that was a long time ago and attitudes have changed, (I hope)

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Marla Joy

Thu 6th Feb 2025 21:28

Naomi,
I wish that I could hit the like button ten times, plus more.
Marla

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