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Meeting Each Other

Before they left their bodies

and moved into the light,

they met each other.

Perhaps it was a cleansing of sorts,

a lightening of burdens.

He survived the harbor bombing;

his neighbor survived the "enemy" internment camp.

He hung to floating debris in oil-slicked waters;

his neighbor found a friend to safeguard his farm while he was interned.

 

When they were both old men, they found themselves living side-by-side in little suburban houses.

Their kitchen doors were only 10 steps away from each other.

They had coffee together in the mornings, sitting at the kitchen table of the fellow who suffered the internment.

 

The internment survivor died first (peacefully on his couch, with his cat for company),

and we bought his house from his son.

The harbor-bombing survivor (a retired Navy guy) was still living with his wife next door, and the seller son told us we had to meet Navy guy and his wife to get their approval before completing the house purchase.

We passed inspection, moved in, and raised our sons there.

Seller son invited us over to his home for dinner once escrow closed, and after a delicious home cooked meal, we were introduced to dad (the ashes, that is, of deceased internment guy, resting in a jar on an ancestral table).

 

And so it goes,

life ebbs and flows,

trauma and healing,

meeting each other,

shared coffee and meals--

what a journey.

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Tom Doolan

Mon 17th Feb 2025 22:36

A very moving reflection Hélène. 💕

Rolph David

Mon 17th Feb 2025 15:27

Hello Hélène,
A powerful, reflective narrative unfolds in Meeting Each Other, where shared history and quiet connections become a testament to the resilience of human spirit. The vivid contrast between the two men, shaped by their individual traumas yet brought together in peaceful proximity, speaks to the healing that can emerge over time. The bond they share through simple daily rituals—coffee, conversation, and community—becomes a subtle but profound metaphor for life’s cycles of suffering and recovery. The quiet dignity with which you explore trauma and healing, as well as the notion of "meeting" each other both in life and beyond, is deeply moving. What stands out is the beautiful ordinariness of the men’s companionship, which highlights the power of shared moments to bridge even the deepest divides.
Regards,
Rolph

TOM MERTON

Sun 16th Feb 2025 19:30

Such a great heartwarming story Helene. Lets hope we all meet up in that other world! Thank you.

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