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FOR ANNIE

 

 

I love to hear her laugh,

belly bubbling

throat clutching

outrageous chuckles.

It starts from deep inside

then fills her eyes

with a merriment that must be shared,

unimpaired

by self imposed restriction

or inhibitions

demanded by our adult role.

We join her in her laughter,

forming a curtain,

her defence against the world. 

◄ AUTUMN BEECHES

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Flyntland

Tue 18th Feb 2025 16:10

RBK. John, Trevor and Stephen - also to Aisha, Holden, Yanma and Naomi, I appreciate your gift of flowers.

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Flyntland

Tue 18th Feb 2025 16:03

Tom and Rolph, Thank you for your very kind comments.

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Tom Doolan

Mon 17th Feb 2025 22:27

Great powerful work Flyntland. 👍

Rolph David

Mon 17th Feb 2025 14:57

Dear Flyntland,

I just wanted to take a moment to express how deeply moved I was by your poem For Annie. The way you captured the purity and joy of laughter is so beautiful. It’s rare to see something so genuine and unrestrained, and your words truly bring Annie’s infectious spirit to life. I was especially struck by the way you highlighted the contrast between uninhibited joy and the constraints of adulthood. Your writing reminds us of the power of shared laughter and its ability to shield us from the world’s challenges. Thank you for such a delightful and thoughtful piece!
Regards,
Rolph

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