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GIVING IN - - AND GIVING UP

 

 

I've grown weary of being shouted at,

this shed is mine, I know my rights,

I should be free to enter

without sitting tenant fights

discussions or discordant voices.

And yet it's I who apologizes

as I subserviently creep away,

backing out of the door

as though afraid of an affray.

I give in - give up and acquiesce

to this  outraged bully who controls

that which I own, and which,

under duress, has been permitted

to make this place his home.

Now I enter at my peril,

this tiny wren, when angered,

is like the offspring of the devil. 

 

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Flyntland

Fri 21st Feb 2025 20:35

Thank you Naomi

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Flyntland

Fri 21st Feb 2025 20:34

Dear Rolph and Tom

I know my place

thank you for reading and for the advice.

TOM MERTON

Fri 21st Feb 2025 18:48

As grim as this piece of advice may come over to you Flyntland
there is the chance it could save your life now and in the future considering the rise of cowardly knife carrying thugs-walk away AND LIVE!👍

That same piece of advice was given to me years ago-by a 2nd Karate expert!

but if you MUST feel obliged to confront this a*******e then do so at a VERY safe distance! here's hoping things work out ok 👍

Rolph David

Fri 21st Feb 2025 17:06

Dear Flyntland,
Thank you for sharing your powerful poem. The words really speak to me, capturing the frustration and despair the lyrical I is facing. I admire your courage in expressing such raw emotion, and I hope you know that your words have a lasting impact.
I truly hope everything turns out fine in the end, and that the "bully" or "intruder" gets what’s coming to him—may he face the consequences of his actions.
Please take care, and know that others hear you and appreciate the vulnerability you’ve shown.
Kind regards,
Rolph

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