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The Problem With Being Comfortable

I have lived

A comfortable life.

I have taken a path

Of safety.

I have been comfortable

With unfinished business.

I have turned a blind eye

To other people's pain.

But I've been uneasy

With doing that which is easy.

And I find,

The problem with being

Comfortable

Is it leads to feeling...

Numb.

 

Aug 2024

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Tom Doolan

Sun 23rd Feb 2025 13:31

Well said Marla: Comfort is the enemy of achievement.” 😊

Rolph David

Sun 23rd Feb 2025 12:54

Marla,
Your poetic work is a powerful reminder that true growth often lies outside our comfort zones. Great work!
Regards,
Rolph

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Hélène

Sun 23rd Feb 2025 12:31

This poem is well written, and personally helpful to me, Marla. Reminds me to stop whining about all the traumas in myself and my family, to feel them fully and accept the stuff I can't change. At least we are not numb, the poem reminds me.

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Flyntland

Sun 23rd Feb 2025 10:24


What an insightful little poem Marla.
We can look around us and see so many people who live in their own bubbles and are completely blind to the world around them.
The beauty of WOL. is that poets are emotional creatures and 'feel' for others as well as themselves.
thank you

PS. I have just realized that I have been calling you Maria, I am so sorry, I only found out when I enlarged the print on my laptop. I wonder how many more people I have given new names to.

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