Last Leaf
I’ll be here right beside you
in the darkness when you call.
I’ll be the one who makes sure
that the last leaf doesn’t fall.
I’ll be here watching over you
though all others are gone.
I’ll be here though you’ve lost the strength
and will to carry on.
I know that it’s your darkest hour.
I know it’s hard to see.
I know because one time I faced
a darkest hour for me.
So, hold on tight to what you see -
that last leaf on the vine,
and I’ll go paint that masterpiece…
and then it is my time.
(Ref: Last Leaf by Oliver Henry)
Rolph David
Mon 10th Mar 2025 16:49
Jeff,
Last Leaf is a beautiful and heartfelt poem. The imagery of the "last leaf" as a symbol of fragile hope is both powerful and moving. I love how you blend compassion and selflessness into the poem, especially with the promise to stay by someone's side in their darkest hour. The reference to O. Henry’s story deepens the message of your poem, reinforcing the theme of sacrifice and the power of unwavering support. It’s a beautiful reminder of the strength we can offer each other when hope feels out of reach. Thank you for sharing such an emotionally resonant and compassionate piece.
Regards,
Rolph