Breaking the ice
I am standing on this corner
With two coffees hoping she will turn up
The girl I finally asked out
The one I finally managed to speak to
Say hi do you fancy grabbing a coffee sometime
I am wondering whether she will Still
Be the same girl as yesterday
The one with spring in her eyes
And summer in her hair
Will she notice the stains on my coat
And the stutter on my lips
Is she caught in traffic
Or is this a part of some elaborate joke
Will I scare her off with my stories
Of someone I once knew
Who looked just like her
Or will she walk right passed me anyway
Will I stop shaking
Looking desperate as if I need a smoke or a drink
Do I tell her that she looks pretty
And I have watched her for a year
Or does that sound kind of creepy
Does she really want to see me
Or is she just being polite
Hi there really sorry I am late
I’m not trying to play it cool
I was wondering hoping that you would still be here
And not brush me off
Because I talk too much when I’m nervous
Should I explain that I have been waiting for
You to ask me out for about a year
Should I mention the stain on your coat
Or just pretend it’s not there
I know I’m kind of flaky
And would not blame you if you ran
But you seem kind of nice
So, I am pleased that you finally broke the ice
Martin Elder
Sun 23rd Mar 2025 15:11
Red brick Hugh Stephen and Holden. Thank you for the likes
Flyntland I am glad you like the perspective I do try to achieve that but don't always achieve it
Thanks Marla I am glad you found it relatable it can be difficult at times to write a piece that is understood in such a way
Ray I take you point with this piece. I guess I was trying to look at the innocence of youth which I still believe exists for many today but is so easily missed by the apparently more newsworthy messed up lives. Also my wife says I am a romantic and a dreamer which I am happy to own