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An identity plan for the young

With a strong personal identity you can withstand what's to come.

Develop a sense of who you are now and who you are to become.

What talents and skills in your life have been enrolled,

Are you punctual,,hardworking,generous and self-controlled?

 

Ask a parent or trusted friend what strengths  he or she sees in you,

"What aspects of my personality I need to change,be true!"

Their thinking ability will keep a watch over you,

Discovering which identity plan is best for you.

 

What moral code to follow on your way,

Clothe yourself with patience,hear me say,

Patience is a virtue,deveiop it when you can,

Emotional and mental growth ,carefully plan.

 

Your identity goes far beyond your appearance and name.

Develop a sense of who you are now on a positive path to fame.

 

 

◄ Emotional health

Comments

Rolph David

Sat 22nd Mar 2025 06:52

Good morning hugh,
There’s something really inspiring in how you approach the idea of developing a strong personal identity. The way you suggest focusing on both current traits and future growth is empowering — it's about building a foundation and being mindful of one’s potential. The emphasis on seeking feedback from trusted people, like parents and friends, adds a valuable layer of self-awareness. The advice on patience and emotional growth really stands out as essential for navigating life’s challenges. The idea that true identity goes beyond appearance and fame speaks volumes, reminding us all to focus on what truly shapes who we are.
Take care,
cheers,
Rolph

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TOM MERTON

Fri 21st Mar 2025 20:52

Words don't come much more wiser than those you have brilliantly put together in this poem.

Thanks Hugh
best of regards mate 👍

Tom

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