Dotted Line
‘Your country needs you!’
Came the breathless whine,
As we put our names
On the dotted line.
Everyone went;
We all joined the queue.
No questions were asked.
None of us knew
About proper war;
We weren’t playing games:
Grenades in an ambush,
A tank crew in flames.
Although we were told
That problems were shared,
It soon became clear
That nobody cared.
Though we have returned
With barely a mark,
Some didn’t survive
This requisite lark.
We pray for them daily,
We ponder their fate,
But such curiosity
Has come far too late.
Flyntland
Mon 24th Mar 2025 20:51
having read your poem I can't help but think about those old photos. of the 'Palls' before they went off together, to fight together, and be killed together.
They were sad little groups of uneducated and underfed young men - these days they would be described as boys - looking unhappy and shocked and wearing ill-fitting uniforms, standing together in mean cobbled streets.
What cynical mind dreamed up that way of getting recruits?