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One Called Paul

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Five drab juveniles land outside my window;

goth eyeliner, raucous and rucking over territory,

fouling up my window ledge, five floors high.

Under murmured shadows, three leave suddenly,

startle the two, who, drawing close, look to each other,

before the larger wings it with thousands in late city skies.

The smallest catches reflections in the high rise glass,

checks its rag tag feathers for signs of iridescence

emerging in the half-light of a noisy urban dusk.

But through my window, I see only reluctance in movement.

I wonder if this one’s worried; ill-prepared to join in

and just needs a little more time to practise.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 7th Apr 2025 08:36

I feel genuine concern for the little one now, Jonathan. The power of verse, I suppose. Hope he made it.

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Marla Joy

Sun 6th Apr 2025 22:33

You inspire me to write better poetry. I love the way the birds are portrayed as juveniles and how you respond to them as if they have human thoughts and actions. Good work. Marla

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