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Performance (Kryvyi Rih 5.4.25)

Twenty dead so far……..

 

I wonder if they get an extra mark

For killing kids or snuffing babies out?

On their twisted scale of staff incentives,

Perhaps their bonus swells at all such scalps;

Perhaps their backs are slapped at each week’s end.

They say that talks for peace are well on track,

But we see little sign of it round here.

We feel the foul, malignant breath of beasts,

As playgrounds and their like become fair game.

We sense a cockeyed competition

Behind this gleeful slaughter of the young.

Does someone climb a rung more up the ladder

For notching unlived lives upon their slate;

Are all, in fact, victims of performance?

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Comments

Rolph David

Mon 7th Apr 2025 11:02


The tragedy in your poem hits with such raw intensity, Stephen. The stark imagery of violence as a twisted "performance" is haunting, especially with the chilling suggestion that innocent lives are treated as trophies in some dehumanising system. Your portrayal of the contrast between peace talks and the brutal reality of the situation is profoundly impactful. It’s a heartbreaking reflection on how deeply ingrained violence can become in these cycles of power. Thank you for shedding light on such a dark, yet necessary truth.
Regards,
Rolph

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 7th Apr 2025 09:40

Whilst having no sympathy at all for these callous evil villains I do believe that no-one is beyond torment and deep down, knowing what they have done, will eat themselves from within until they too perish.

A rightfully sombre/sobering piece Stephen, thank you for this

G

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