Angry Man

‘Savoury stuff. That’s the ticket,’

Said my friend in the canteen queue.

Naturally more circumspect,

I asked ‘Is that potato real?’

‘You’re joking,’ quipped Young Doris

(Old Doris was doing desserts),

And piled the slop up on my plate.

Those lunches hit you where it hurts.

 

Finding a table, we sat down,

With colleagues in old overalls,

Who talked of hangings and of words,

Of plumbing blocked and victory.

I thought of repurposed churches,

Of comrades who had disappeared,

And of the odd kind glance or wink

Among the populace you feared.

 

Once I escaped to the oxygen

Of green leaves in the countryside.

No compulsory love or hate –

No one here was being denounced –

Just the sound of birds and crickets;

I lay, blissful, beneath a tree.

Then Angry Man, hogging the screen,

Cried: ‘You’re gambling with World War Three!’  

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◄ Performance (Kryvyi Rih 5.4.25)

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David RL Moore

Tue 15th Apr 2025 08:33

Hello Stephen,

It might please you to know I immediately recognised the tone and atmosphere of 1984 within the text of this piece.

The imagery of Orwells text is well reflected in your own words. I think the use of the word "Comrade" and the grey hue you have created, coupled with your use of environmental settings conveys the dystopian world Orwell imagined. "Hogging the screen" is perfect when considering 1984.

The transposition of the two dynamics works well and begs the questions, which world are we currently living in and who is Big Brother?

My favourite work of yours, purely for it's provocation of thought.

David RL Moore

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 12th Apr 2025 15:15

Thank you, Graham, for your generous comment. It is much appreciated. I would of course be grateful for any further feedback from your side.
I started writing this after hearing an old BBC recording of 1984 with Patrick Troughton as Winston Smith.

Rolph- thanks as always for your perceptive comment. Yes, it was a reference to Trump's remark in the Oval Office.And Trump seems to be someone who is permanently angry, resentful or out for revenge. Like a rather overheated Big Brother, in fact!

Uilleam- we should be vigilant. No one deserves to disappear. Even Paul Daniels couldn't do it.

And thanks to everyone who liked this poem.

Rolph David

Sat 12th Apr 2025 08:16

Dear Stephen,
Your poem "Angry Man" is a fascinating commentary on the complex interplay between the mundane and the deeply unsettling aspects of life. The shift from the trivial conversation in the canteen about "savoury stuff" to the more haunting reflections on “repurposed churches” and the “comrades who had disappeared” draws a powerful contrast. It speaks to the stark reality of a time or place where fear and political tension permeate even the simplest moments, like a lunch break.
The transition to the “oxygen of green leaves” offers such a vivid sense of escape—a peaceful moment of reprieve from the chaos. But then, the abrupt return to tension with Angry Man and his dramatic proclamation, “You’re gambling with World War Three!” serves as a jarring reminder of the looming, unresolved threats in the world.
I do believe your reference in the final line could indeed be a nod to Trump’s infamous remark to Zelensky, but it also seems to be a broader commentary on how easily such dire pronouncements can come from unexpected places. It’s a clever, thought-provoking way of showing how the personal and the political often collide, with unsettling consequences.
Thanks for sharing such a layered and impactful piece.
Regards,
Rolph

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 11th Apr 2025 10:35

Intriguing work Stephen. I’m minded to think this is the best poem of yours that I’ve read! I’m still digesting it and may well comment further but it is (imho) a quality piece

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 11th Apr 2025 09:12

Thanks, Stephen.
Comrades, journalists poets and teachers are currently being "disappeared", having been proscribed as a terrorist threat!
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