Angry Man
‘Savoury stuff. That’s the ticket,’
Said my friend in the canteen queue.
Naturally more circumspect,
I asked ‘Is that potato real?’
‘You’re joking,’ quipped Young Doris
(Old Doris was doing desserts),
And piled the slop up on my plate.
Those lunches hit you where it hurts.
Finding a table, we sat down,
With colleagues in old overalls,
Who talked of hangings and of words,
Of plumbing blocked and victory.
I thought of repurposed churches,
Of comrades who had disappeared,
And of the odd kind glance or wink
Among the populace you feared.
Once I escaped to the oxygen
Of green leaves in the countryside.
No compulsory love or hate –
No one here was being denounced –
Just the sound of birds and crickets;
I lay, blissful, beneath a tree.
Then Angry Man, hogging the screen,
Cried: ‘You’re gambling with World War Three!’
David RL Moore
Tue 15th Apr 2025 08:33
Hello Stephen,
It might please you to know I immediately recognised the tone and atmosphere of 1984 within the text of this piece.
The imagery of Orwells text is well reflected in your own words. I think the use of the word "Comrade" and the grey hue you have created, coupled with your use of environmental settings conveys the dystopian world Orwell imagined. "Hogging the screen" is perfect when considering 1984.
The transposition of the two dynamics works well and begs the questions, which world are we currently living in and who is Big Brother?
My favourite work of yours, purely for it's provocation of thought.
David RL Moore