SHATTERED AIR
A yearning took root
My foolish heart exposed.
I gave in to wanting
Build castles of air
Watered my naive desires
Ignoring the whispers of doubt.
Then, the inevitable unraveling began.
The settling of the dust
The sudden frost
The withering of my petals
Leaving behind a bare stem.
Now, just the bare bones of what I was.
A hollow echo remains
A quiet shame settles in my chest.
The mistake of needing too much
Too much hope carried
My vulnerability laid bare.
Then, a cold understanding dawns
Too much given, nothing returned
A lesson etched in pain.
Foolish,yes. And utterly alone.
Naomi
Sat 12th Apr 2025 15:26
Dear Rolph,
Your message is deeply appreciated.
It's wonderful to know that the poem resonated with you on such a profound level, and your interpretation of its themes is insightful. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts so eloquently.
Best regards,
Naomi