DUSK AND DEPARTURE
We sat in the soft dusk
The air heavy with a silence we couldn't shake.
Our friend was gone
But still we held his name between us.
It was a question unspoken, but felt by all.
One spoke first, his eyes distant.
The sea, where the water meets the sky
In the vastness, the endless horizon.
There he could be free
Carried far and beyond, like the wind
But never truly gone.
Another voice, steady but broken.
In the mountains
Let him rest where earth meets the heavens
Where the air is thin.
There, he'll be quiet
Immovable and untouched by time.
And in I chimed
With a sadness that was almost peaceful.
Let him lie in the jungle
Where the trees hold secrets
And the ground remembers things.
Where life pulses at every breath.
And there he'll grow and fade
Side by side with the trees.
Each place felt right
And yet none of them felt enough.
For what truly mattered
Was the bond we'd shared
The way he had lived in us
And would continue to live.
Naomi
Mon 14th Apr 2025 11:24
Dear Rolph,
Thank you for your beautifully worded message.
Your insights into the imagery and the significance of the bond we shared are particularly meaningful to me.
It's comforting to know that the poem's intention to capture the enduring nature of connection resonated with you.
Thank you again for taking the time to share your thoughtful reflections.
Best regards,
Naomi