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iron lung

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God knows why we went

Wendy Pedley and me

To the Camping and Caravanning Exhibition

At Earl’s Court.

We must have thought that something else was on.

And there we saw it.

The iron lung.

 

Why? Why was it there?

Displayed as an exciting new invention.

Near scared two girls to death!

 

A long iron coffin

With a window where the eyes would be.

If you were inside.

If you had to live inside

The iron lung.

 

Grotesque contraption

Oblong and evil as

Death’s Trojan horse.

A vast Max Ernst steam engine

Of horror.

A lumbering coffin,

A last hope

In the days when polio was fresh.

Alien formidable carriage.

Warhorse trundler.

Tumbrel of a fate far worse than death.

Coarse metal with visor window.

Can you close your eyes

If you cannot breathe?

No choice but to breathe in and to breathe out.

No choice but to see.

                *

And I remember another time

With mum and dad

Walking down a street somewhere

When I was small.

A similar contraption passed us by

And I peeped in, on my tiptoes.

And where the face should be

There was a face

Yet not a face -

A dinner plate of vast proportions.

Blank eyed behind the screen

Like a goldfish bowl.

A head like a goldfish bowl

But huge.

And I was too scared

And mum and dad too embarrassed

To ever mention it.

              *

There must be so much that is unspoken of.

Childhood horrors accidentally glimpsed

That never fade.

Hiding still, squeezed into the nightmare place

At the back of our skulls.

Yet our humanity should tell us

That there are no monsters.

Only sadness, pain and disappointment.

The time has come

For me to face the horror

Of the iron lung.

 

 

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Isobel

Tue 17th Aug 2010 16:14

This is horrible Ann and you catch that horror well. I didn't know there were such contraptions back then - a living hell. There is lots of great language in here.'war horse tumblertumbrel of fate' I liked those words - also comparing the face to a dinner plate - sad and white and isolated.
It brings to mind something I witnessed once whilst taking my nephew and niece to a park in London. A young child with warts on its trachea - it had one of those holes in the throat and the nurse had to pump oxygen in at certain intervals. My nephew nearly fainted. She was wearing bright red patent leather shoes. Everywhere we went we kept bumping into the shoes - it was a nightmare. Prior to the incident I had chatted to her. The child was from a rich family but had been abandoned and left to a children's home because of this problem. What some people have to put up with defies belief...

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Dave Bradley

Sat 14th Aug 2010 21:48

Powerful Ann - some very strong images, very evocative.

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 14th Aug 2010 18:38

Oooh! But thank you for the kind wowsers comment! xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 14th Aug 2010 18:24

I was thinking about the germs being fresh and running around, all squiggling about! My first term at infants school was delayed by about 6 months cos the school was closed due to a local outbreak of polio. So, polio = fresh as in live, active and 'orrible!

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 14th Aug 2010 16:24

Seem to be laying a few ghosts lately - and facing a few fears. Inspired to post this as a response to Dave Bradley's latest poem. Not sure mine is finished - it's a bit complicated maybe!

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