comet tails
Home was warm buttery potatoes
a thermometer under the tongue
Lucozade bubbling orange on the bedside table
cream of tomato soup after the doctor’s been.
A firework buying expedition
walking through chilly streets with dad
mum left at home.
In the shop Brocks’ boxes
blazing black and red and yellow
Jumping Jacks and Catherine Wheels
and Roman Candles
Mount Etna cones waiting for ignition.
Blue touch paper and the future
smell of gunpowder.
Next day hunting in the park for broken sticks
knowing they were the tails of comets.
Dali
Sat 11th Sep 2010 08:20
Beautiful and the last two lines are truly special. I have to try and write something like this myself, those things come back to us whenever they want..