Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Seven, lethal

The convolvulus wants it all

to have, to own, entwine, consume

nothing too large or small.

Condemned to famine, it chases banquets.

If possible it would devour

You.

It will never be full.

 

The ivy, too, must have.

It wants endlessly,

bewitched by what it sees.

It whispers in the ear,

sucks emotion dry,

its tentacles contaminate.

It will not be content.

 

The hawthorn, tearing its friends

is defeated, disappointed

but the problem lies not in itself,

there is a fault, a flaw, it refuses

the gift of tranquility.

Another must be blamed and struck.

It will not be benign.

 

The rambling rose,

short cut, dead end, bottomless pit,

turning trust to dust,

insatiable maw, fantasising shape-shifter,

bemusing its perfumed slaves.

It will not be restrained. 

 

Moss, molasses of the mind.

Cancerous, invasive, subversive mange,

the will blearing, smearing, melting,

soggy puddle dissolving.

For fear or fat it fails to care,

It will not be troubled.

 

The nettle, useless shade-living weed

surrenders the will to darkness

and says there is no Spring,

believe only in Winter.

How can a mood be sin,

but how now if gloom be a choice?

It refuses the gift of resilience.

It must be grasped.

 

The sequoia, shallow-rooted giant, bestriding all,

showering vile leaves, tainted compost

on struggling life beneath.

Web-centre spider.

Touch a man here,

You turn him killer.

It will not be brought low or find grace.

 

The seven are serious.

They will not dance or laugh,

they cannot whistle or wink,

or frolic, except to grimly

play out their game.

We are their game.

They are the maggot in our apple,

spoiling the sweetness of life.

They are the seven.

◄ Biting the Bullet - result

Little green men (Freedom) ►

Comments

Profile image

Harry O'Neill

Fri 5th Apr 2013 21:02


Dave,
glad this was resurrected...fascinating idea.

Were the seven deadly sins ever made the subject of a comp as Anne suggested?

Steve Smith

Fri 5th Apr 2013 13:25

I love the stance of the poem and especially the verses on hawthorn,nettle and sequoia where you turn the power up.
Steve Smith

Profile image

Isobel

Sat 9th Oct 2010 08:58

I love the use of nature in here Dave - you show some impressive horticultural knowledge! The 7 deadly sins is a biggie to tackle - you don't shrink from much, do you?

You don't get over the fact that a bit of sin can be very appealing sometimes though. Perhaps that's the subject matter for another poem...

Profile image

Dave Bradley

Fri 8th Oct 2010 21:48

Hi Ann

Not sure whether to respond here or on your profile, but for the sake of continuity, here.

Andy's choice of 'Freedom' should work well, because it is not too constricting and imagination can run away with it. It's possible that the 7 Deadly Sins - exciting a topic as that could be (imagine eye-winking emoticon) - would be too specific. But if you want to, there's nothing stopping you, particularly if whoever wins Andy's comp doesn't want to run one themselves.

If you do it, can I put down a marker that this will be re-blogged!

Profile image

Ann Foxglove

Fri 8th Oct 2010 21:10

Wouldn't the seven deadly sins be a great subject for our monthly comp?

Profile image

Dave Bradley

Fri 8th Oct 2010 20:05

Thanks for commenting, Ann & Greg. Perhaps I should have mentioned that this is about the 7 deadly sins. There are variable lists. This uses the one that includes Despair.

Profile image

Ann Foxglove

Fri 8th Oct 2010 12:57

Golly Dave they're only poor innocent plants! ;-) A good powerful poem, rather witchcrafty but in a negative sort of way. I guess you've been doing too much gardening lately! xx

Profile image

Greg Freeman

Fri 8th Oct 2010 08:04

This is a very impressive poem, Dave. You pursue your argument with a rich succession of images of the dark side of nature. Not everything in the garden is rosy ... now where did I put my secateurs?

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message