The lights are out upstairs in me
Hell knows my head’s been gone so long
Others can’t reach the place I be
Mind fears you are the only one
Kings fall and prince’s hearts unfold
Never to sail the storms I ride
Only the pen your fingers hold
Will write these truths untold inside
A lovely poem.
<Deleted User> (5984)
Wed 11th Jun 2008 20:08
What an absolutely beautiful poem. It is very gentle and I love your rhyme scheme. A very soothing poem.
Mel
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<Deleted User> (4281)
Wed 11th Jun 2008 01:48
Dear Alison
You poem is very nice… Shows unfold mystery especially in the last stanza. I have enjoyed reading your thoughts provoking poem...Keep up the great work!
Thank you,
Zuzanna
How enchanting, nice stuff Ally, you're on a roll! Keep it up, enjoy your work, Jeff
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Ann Foxglove
Tue 24th Nov 2009 19:59
Really beautiful, sounds like someone longing to find true peace.