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A few short short poems (1)

 NB. I am rubbish at counting dashes with Haiku’s, so these maybe are Haiku’s
        or maybe just short short poems. 

 Enjoy Andy N

(New Website – http://www.andyn.org.uk)
 
(i)
 
Lost in thought
I almost don’t see you
Say a nervous hello.
 
 
(ii)
Even the wind-mills looked
Alone when the rain stopped
That morning.
 
(iii)
 
Standing at the end
Of the road, I look back to
See how far I have come.
 
(iv)
 
Like a barrier or
An overprotecting shield,
The moon hid behind clouds.
 
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haikushort poetry

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Comments

<Deleted User> (7164)

Tue 2nd Nov 2010 21:16

Number 3 on both sets for me too. Looks like you have a unanimous vote there Andy. I wonder if that's auspicious for who wins the comp you are running? Hmm!
(only joking, i'm not predicting)
xx

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Isobel

Sat 30th Oct 2010 08:52

Number 3 stands out for me. x

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